TwitterGroup Treatment - Third Draft
Explanation for changes: This third draft provides more insight into what happens in the conflict, with James opting to immorally use his powers, this draft is even more character-arc friendly by a slight amount, because James is doing more mischief with the super-powers than in the second draft, and the mischief is directly linked to other students, again expanding on James' background and the influence it's had on him as a person: someone who may have been full of venegence and anger, but before had managed to retain those negative feelings within him, as maybe he felt a sense of vulnerability to the aforementioned students.
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