TwitterGroup Treatment - Second Draft
Explanation for changes: The story idea, and consequently the treatment for the story, had a complete overhaul due to the need of a genuine conflict that involved two contrasting forces colliding and disrupting the main character. Iain If anything, in the original idea, it featured two solitary forces coming together to ultimately create the setup that was present from the beginning, this is coupled with whatever danger faced by Iain, which was the upcoming traffic in front of him, was always going to diminish even without the intervention of the woman. What the original idea also lacked was a firm character arc: how a character grows and develops as the story progresses, there were no scenarios where main characters tackled certain challenges correctly or incorrectly, there's very little reflection, if any at all, from the characters' perspectives on their behaviour and attitudes towards events that occur. With the other story idea, the main character James Peters is morally challenged by the extent of his super-powers, and the challenge features the responsibility throw to James to do good or bad, the conflict is himself and the morals he has, which then go on to partly forming a character background.
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